Hey all! I’m away from the computer today and taking my place is fellow author Savannah J. Foley. Please enjoy her excerpt of her upcoming novel and say hello! I thought this excerpt was awesome and can’t wait to read more.

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Hello everyone!

My name is Savannah J. Foley, and I joined the Bradford Literary Agency in December. It took a full seven months (it’s my fault; I hibernate January through March), but we’re finally ready to begin pitching my novel, and that means I’m now ready to start sharing it with the world at large (not that I wasn’t before; see below for details!)

I’m very excited to share this excerpt with you. I’m going to spend the next few paragraphs telling you who it all came about, so feel free to skip right down to the plot summary and excerpt if you like and come back to this later:

Antebellum is the first novel I ever wrote. The inspiration came from an idea I had at the age of 14: What would a society ruled by women truly look like? Would it be wars or would it be utopian? What would happen to the men? At the time I bought into the stereotype of women in that they are inherent nurturers - more peaceful, kind, and wiser than men, who are violent, cruel, sex-obsessed, and ultimately disposable. I thought it would be interesting to create a world where women were dominant and men fought for their equality, in an ironic reversal of feminism.

Antebellum, then under a different name, was placed online at FictionPress.com. As the years passed and I updated chapters with better writing, and posted two more books in the series, my story grew an increasingly large fan base, gaining hundreds of marked favorites and thousands of positive reviews.

I began seeking out agent representation in July of last year and finally found the right agent in Laura Bradford. I’ve dreamed of being a published author since I was 8 years old, so I can’t tell you what an exciting and surreal experience this is. Most of all, I’m excited that I get to share this story with so many others. It’s been six years, and I and my readers still love this book and these characters. I hope you will, too.

Plot Summary: In a utopian society, women are the sacred ruling class and men live as slaves and homemakers. When a young woman takes her first slave, an abused and beautiful mute of unknown origin, the forbidden romance between equals that develops shakes her belief in both her religion and way of life. Consumed with this secret heresy and a deadly illness that threatens her life, rumors of a Rebellion bring hope of the truth and a better future… if they survive.

Excerpt from Chapter 1:

He was running out of chances.

The wound on his side had broken the skin, and he could already feel a heat licking around his ribs. This was his last rotation before they would send him to the West Hall. The desperation came over him so strongly he could barely move. The panic felt like a million hands touching him, and he fought off all emotion, retreating to the internal world where he heard nothing, saw nothing, and most importantly of all was ruled by nothing.

He weighed the options: Grovel like a whore before the Woman he would face, praying she looked past his disability and what they would call his ‘clumsiness’, or merely survive this one, last torment and accept the inevitable transfer to a lifetime of hard work and violence in the West Hall. He knew what waited for him in the West. They loved to taunt him, watching the fear grow in him until it was too much to bear and he shut it down. The West Hall was a familiar Hell. He would know how to survive there. A Woman, on the other hand, was an unknown risk. He had been trained for slavedom his whole life. He knew what would be expected of him, and though that life would be far less strenuous, it was the nights he feared, when he would be called upon to not only submit to the violation, but participate in it himself. He didn’t know if he was strong enough for that.

He heard footsteps, and bristled, but it was only Number 17 slipping into his room.

“Let me see.”

He shoved Number 17’s hands away but the older boy was not deterred. His shirt was already sticking to the wound. He braced through the inspection.

“If you’d quit staying here at night alone maybe this wouldn’t happen so often. You should come back. You’re not the only one who pays when you stay away.”

He pulled down his shirt and shrugged.

“Why didn’t you tell me you had a Choosing today? Morning line-up and you weren’t there, I thought they’d finally finished you. What would happen if you actually got Chosen? I would never see you again.”

He didn’t answer.

Number 17 sighed. “I don’t care how you feel, that’s not something you do to your workmate.”

The bell rang, and for the first time he felt relieved to hear its signal. It was time to go.

Number 17 grabbed his arm. “If I never see you again, goodbye.”

He hesitated for a moment, then gave the hand signal which between them meant the same as those words. They had seen many workmates go up the stairs and never come back down. When they were younger the disappearances had been weekly, if not more frequent than that. Everyone in the Barracks used the same signal, which substituted for a full farewell, and the last words that might ever be exchanged between two Nameless of the same Division.

He left Number 17 and entered the hallway. Walking hurt worse than breathing. He controlled his pace, never revealing the pain braided into his side. When he arrived at the lobby the foul-tempered Director was there, looking haughty and impatient, so whoever the Woman was this time, she must be important. The Director never came down to the Barracks if she could help it. She inspected the line, grabbing his chin to sneer and pronounce something mockingly, but he wasn’t listening. They began the march out of the Barracks and up the stairs. His side clenched with each step, his vision blackening from holding his breath to steady his abdomen.

The Woman waiting for them must be very special. The line didn’t stop at the usual display room where they had met other Women before. Instead they kept climbing, the heavy-set director breathing harder as she lifted her robes to ascend. They were in the upper levels now, with public traffic. He feared what would happen next; this march was out of the ordinary, and it was never good when schedules changed.

Finally they entered a dim holding room, and the guards snaked them around in tight curves so they would proceed outward in a single, long line. The Director placed herself at the head, sweating, and waited. Minutes passed as the Nameless stood still, listening for the buzz beyond the single wood door to fall silent.

He heard some of the others praying quietly. It might be one of their last chances, too. Darkness made the guards nervous, and they paced around the room with their whips drawn, sometimes nudging a Nameless forward or backward an inch, asserting their authority and preserving perfect order. He ignored them.

Finally the Director swore and sent her attendant scurrying out a side door to alert the distant crowd that the males had arrived. The noise beyond the door died. All the Nameless stood straighter, and a painful burn of adrenaline surged into his stomach. It was time.

The Director flung open the door. He stepped with the others into the sun.

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The day I became a slave owner was filled with light…

To continue reading Chapter 1 of Antebellum, click here (http://www.savannahjfoley.com/antebellumsamplechapter/).

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