It’s cold today and I LOVE it. The heat is on, the sky is cloudy and it looks like it might rain. I have candles lit in the kitchen and my house feels so cozy and warm in contrast to outside. Am I the only one who enjoys a cold and rainy day? I love rain, I really do. I adore thunderstorms too, though when there’s high wind. Oh, and give me snow and I’m in heaven.
I’m an inclement weather lover!
So, enough about the weather. I finished a short story recently, (I would categorize a short story as anything under 10k). It was the second short I’ve done in the last six months. I find short stories extremely difficult to write. Writing a good one is more difficult than writing a full length novel, imo, since you have such a limited space in which to develop your characters and tell your story. I enjoy writing them because they’re a challenge.
But I never said I was good at them. I do the very best I can with them and I like to write them. Whether or not they’re good is in the eye of the reader.
Here’s the basic laws I obey for a short story. (I apply these same rules for long fiction too, plus some.)
1.) Make your main character sympathetic. Make the reader care about what happens to him/her. Sink your emotional claws in within the first couple paragraphs.
2.) Make every word count. Cut out all the fat.
3.) Show every emotion, never tell.
4.) Sensory detail, sensory detail, sensory detail — what do things sound, feel, smell, taste like? Add a lot it in order to immerse the reader in the setting.
5.) Twist at the end with something major that affects the fate of the character the reader has invested herself in.
6.) The last sentence should ring loud and clear even after the reader had finished the story.
I love to read really well written short fiction. I don’t normally read literary fiction for fun, but I do love the Best American Short Story anthologies that come over every year. And when I was a kid, I LOVED O. Henry.
Do you like to read shorts? Do prefer longer fiction? Why or why not?
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Also, the truly wonderful Adrienne Jones is guest blogging over on Maverick Authors today. I’m offering a giveaway of one of her novels, The Hoax.





















November 11th, 2008 at 9:53 am
Yes, it is really challenging to write a short story. It takes effort and time to complete one, even though small. I love to read short short stories.
You have given some wonderful thoughts about writing short stories. Thank you for sharing them.
November 11th, 2008 at 10:24 am
I prefer longer fiction because I’m a character development fan, and (IMneverHO) very few authors can pull character development and coherent plot in a short story. Those who can
can’t get rid off me ever again, though.
November 11th, 2008 at 11:13 am
Anya,
As for short stories, I’ve written quite a few. I agree they are hard to write and do a good job.
I like your list of musts. I think the hardest thing to do with a romance short story is make all the emotions crystal clear and have it be believable. One of the hardest things I’ve done is write three “quickies” for Ellora’s Cave and make the relationships believable and HOT.
Not easy to do.
I love cloudy, rainy days. I’m very creative when it’s foggy out and cool, or if there is a good snowstorm. I’m with you.
Denise A. Agnew
November 11th, 2008 at 11:13 am
P.S. That being said, I love long novels with all their texture and the adventure and possibilities!
Denise A. Agnew
November 11th, 2008 at 6:18 pm
I love reading shorts, but I imagine they’re hard to do well–there’s so much story to fit into so few words!